*MISTAKE
1) * 6 millions of pounds
YOUR CORRECTION
ˆ CORRECT FORM
-?- 6 million pounds £6 million £6m N.B. Millions of people....
2) * because they well came back
-?- Because they will come back.. Because they are going to come back Because they came back...
3) * Britain interest
-?- Britain's interests The interests of Britain British interests Britain's interest
4) * they decide to sent the british fleet
-?- They decided to send the British fleet
5) * for various reason
-?- for various reasons...
6) * on the north
-?- in the north in the north of...
7) * on June 1850
-?- in June 1850 N.B.: in 1850 on Monday on 3rd June 1850
8) * on November
-?- in November
9) * british trups
-?- British troops
10) * she had even obtain
-?- She had even obtained...
11) * she spend her time
-?- She spent her time... (Past) She spends her time... (Present)
12) * the Britain's status
-?- Britain's status...
13) * If Britain enter the crimean war...
-?- If Britain entered the Crimean War... When Britain entered the Crimean War ...
14) * the Christian's minority
-?- The Christian minorities The Christians
15) * the frenches
-?- The French
16) * no one knows why did Britain enter the war...
-?- No one knows why Britain entered the war...
16) * The french hopital
-?- The French hospital...
17) * this war have had positiv aspects..
-?- This war has had positive aspects... This war had positive aspects...
18) * The Queen Victoria
-?- Queen Victoria ... The Queen ...
19) * they could followed each events
-?- They could follow each event...
20) * we can remembered...
-?- We can remember...